Comparison of English teacher feedback and automated writing feedback on the quality of English language learners' essay revision
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Han, Feifei and Wang, Zehua. (2021). Comparison of English teacher feedback and automated writing feedback on the quality of English language learners' essay revision. Open/Technology in Education, Society, and Scholarship Association Conference. 2020 Open/Technology in Education, Society, and Scholarship Association. pp. 1-5 https://doi.org/10.18357/otessac.2021.1.1.44
| Authors | Han, Feifei and Wang, Zehua |
|---|---|
| Type | Conference paper |
| Abstract | This study compared the effects of teacher feedback (TF) and online automated feedback (AF) on the quality of revision of English writing. It also examined the strengths and weaknesses of the two types of feedback perceived by English language learners (ELLs) as a foreign language (FL). Sixty-eight Chinese students from two English classes participated the study. The two classes received TF and online AF (Scoring Network) respectively upon completion of their draft essays. While the two classes did not differ on the English writing proficiency, the class receiving TF obtained significantly higher scores on essay revision, indicating the better effect of TF. Students’ responses showed that, overall, TF was more positively commented upon because the encouraging words motivated students to revise. In contrast, the students receiving online AF criticized the Scoring Network for their difficulty to comprehend the feedback they were provided. The results suggest that English teachers may consider using TF as a major source of feedback in English writing for ELLs in China. |
| Keywords | teacher feedback; automated writing feedback; English language learners; Chinese university students; essay writing; quality of revision |
| Year | 2021 |
| Publisher | Open/Technology in Education, Society, and Scholarship Association |
| ISSN | 2816-2021 |
| Digital Object Identifier (DOI) | https://doi.org/10.18357/otessac.2021.1.1.44 |
| Open access | Open access |
| Research or scholarly | Research |
| Publisher's version | License File Access Level Open |
| Journal citation | 1 (1), pp. 1-5 |
| Page range | 1-5 |
| Web address (URL) of conference proceedings | https://conference.otessa.org/index.php/conference/issue/view/1 |
| Output status | Published |
| Publication dates | |
| Online | 24 Dec 2021 |
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| Deposited | 23 Aug 2022 |
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